Hi,

I just read your story and I think it is great! I was really suprised that there were not any other reviews so far. So I signed up, just to give you at least one, well deserved, review.

Love the story, I think your description of the characters is super. To bad that you did not see a chance to continue the story. I'd have loved to see how you would further improve the story.

Kind regards,

Marlies