Reviews For The Influence of Jack O’Neill
Reviewer: steadfast (Signed) · Date: Oct 23, 2014 5:31 pm · On: Chapter 1
I know you were going for internal dialog, but the format made it really hard to read. Kanan, not Ka'an. |
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