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Reviews For Brief Lapse
Reviewer: delaine (Signed) · Date: Apr 03, 2011 9:40 pm · On: Chapter 1
You make Jack's desire so real and palpable and his response so becoming of his situation, except for that one brief touch. So much content; feelings and actions packed into 400+words. I'm sure I will read it again.
Reviewer: delaine (Signed) · Date: Jan 12, 2011 10:20 am · On: Chapter 1
Thanks for your little story. It is amazing how much significance and comfort even the smallest touch can provide - especially when that is all you can have. You did a great job of interpreting one of those unspoken moments in Sam and Jack history. |
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