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Reviews For First To Fall
Reviewer: delaine (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 11:04 am · On: Chapter 1
What a way to go!!!!! Nicely done. Sweet, but not saccharine. I can imagine it happening just the way you wrote it. Now its time to fish or cut bait!!! Thanks for the lovely warm moment.
Reviewer: Neferlue (Signed) · Date: Oct 14, 2009 10:16 pm · On: Chapter 1
I liked it! Nice touch with Daniel winning the pool, and Jacob winning a bet :) |
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