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Reviews For Outside Looking In
Reviewer: steadfast (Signed) · Date: Sep 12, 2013 12:57 pm · On: Chapter 1
I really liked Jack getting an earful. But I thought him wondering what he did to deserve it did not work. They just got done saying what he did. I would have like to see the ending with him wondering how to get their respect back. |
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